I feel like I touched upon what the class wanted in the last critique. It's less offensive and I believe that the audience will feel more comfortable. This weekend, this is the only class I got work in so I think that I will get a good amount of stuff done. My resume is CRISP. Monday at five is my last chance! Im going to tweak my reel as well. At the career service meeting I learned that I need to make my resume fit the standards of an applicable internship.